DRESS FOR SUCCESS

2016-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Everything has changed. That is why modern people hesitate and worry about what to wear or how to wear in front of a mirror. When it comes to clothes, I am not that picky. I prefer to wear conservatively, and my wife perceives it well. As most women do, she goes mad at shopping. Most of my clothes were selected by my wife. However, I wouldn't like to take away the happiness of her best hobby, so I usually let her go, as long as it doesn't make a decisive difference from my taste. There is my own dress code. There are at least a few activitis that still call for a suit such as weddings, funerals, job interviews, formal meetings, etc. All suits I have are navy blue, black and dark gray. Except for formal activities, I don't care about dressing. The best way of "Dress for success" is to avoid wearing inappropreate clothes according to situations. The most important thing is to posess rich knowledge and rewarding experience and to show positive, progressive and proactive inner beauty.

강사 첨삭

Most people say that the way you choose your clothes clerly reflects your personality :) I don\'t think it applies to me since I love wearing black, but as you know, my personality is very bubbly! On the other hand, I am impressed with people who really try their best to dress up :) It means they are paying attention to the place, occassion, and the person they are with^^ Have a great Thursday, Sir [이름]! Have a great day! Everything has changed. >>CORRECT! That is why modern people hesitate and worry about what to wear or how to wear in front of a mirror. >>That is why modern people hesitate and worry about what to wear or how to wear their clothes in front of a mirror. When it comes to clothes, I am not that picky. >>CORRECT! I prefer to wear conservatively, and my wife perceives it well. >>CORRECT!  As most women do, she goes mad at shopping. >>CORRECT! Most of my clothes were selected by my wife. >>CORRECT! However, I wouldn\'t like to take away the happiness of her best hobby, so I usually let her go, as long as it doesn\'t make a decisive difference from my taste. >>However, I wouldn\'t like to take away the happiness of doing her most favorite hobby, so I usually let her, as long as it doesn\'t make a decisive difference from my taste. There is my own dress code. >>I have my own dress code. There are at least a few activitis that still call for a suit such as weddings, funerals, job interviews, formal meetings, etc. >>There are at least a few activities that still call for a suit such as weddings, funerals, job interviews, formal meetings, etc. All suits I have are navy blue, black and dark gray. >>CORRECT! Except for formal activities, I don\'t care about dressing. >>Except for formal activities, I don\'t care about dressing up. The best way of \"Dress for success\" is to avoid wearing ina ppropreate clothes according to situations. >>The best way of \"dress for success\" is to avoid wearing inappropreate clothes according to situation. The most important thing is to posess rich knowledge and rewarding experience and to show positive, progressive and proactive inner beauty. >>CORRECT!

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