DRINK JUICE

2014-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you like drinking juice? Yes, juice is deliciouse! Do you drink juice daily? Yes, I drink juice every moning. Juice is good for our bougies. Yes it is. I also drink juice every moning. We`ll grow up strong and healthy!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

 

Thank you for your dialogue. It\'s simple and direct. Please check your spelling.

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

Do you like drinking juice?

>>>CORRECT

Yes, juice is deliciouse!

>>>Yes, juice is delicious!

Do you drink juice daily?
>>>CORRECT


Yes, I drink juice every moning.

>>>Yes, I drink juice every morning.


Juice is good for our bougies.
>>>Juice is good for our bodies.


Yes it is.

>>>CORRECT


I also drink juice every moning.
>>>I also drink juice every morning.


We`ll grow up strong and healthy!

>>>CORRECT

 

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