Drinking Alcohol

2013-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Many people feel shy, awkward, or afraid in certain situations. They in a stressful situation want something that is quick and easy to get their mind off their problems. Some people get help from alcohol when they talk about something serious. Although it’s really difficult for them to speak about a serious issue when they are sober, they could get courageous after drinking because alcohol naturally causes people to lose their inhibitions, feel more relaxed, and become seemingly more outgoing or less shy temporarily. However, the problem is that when you drink too much, it would have detrimental effects, resulting in unintended and undesirable outcomes. Especially when you are drunk and your partner is not intoxicated at all, then the situation would be miserable. All what you say could hear to others who are sober just as drunk talks without sincerity. Unfortunately, excessive drinking only leads to more problems and it does not actually provide an end to your problem.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]^^ Happy Tuesday! How is the weather in Korea? I hope that you are having a great day at work. Thank you for being a diligent student. I really admire you for sharing your ideas. I think some people can express their feelings more after a drinking session. As you\'ve mentioned, they feel more comfortable. Thank you for sending this in.^^ I just want to ask you more about this sentence: \"All what you say could hear to others who are sober just as drunk talks without sincerity.\" Can you please elaborate it further in class! See you! Take Care!Teacher Nina Many people feel shy, awkward, or afraid in certain situations. >> Correct! They in a stressful situation want something that is quick and easy to get their mind off their problems. >> They are in a stressful situation and they want something that is quick and easy to get their mind off their problems. Some people get help from alcohol when they talk about something serious. >> Correct! Although it’s really difficult for them to speak about a serious issue when they are sober, they could get courageous after drinking because alcohol naturally causes people to lose their inhibitions, feel more relaxed, and become seemingly more outgoing or less shy temporarily. >> Although it\'s really difficult for them to talk about a serious issue when they are sober, they get the courage to tell it after drinking because alcohol naturally causes people to lose their inhibitions, feel more relaxed, and become seemingly more outgoing or less shy temporarily. However, the problem is that when you drink too much, it would have detrimental effects, resulting in unintended and undesirable outcomes. >> Correct! Especially when you are drunk and your partner is not intoxicated at all, then the situation would be miserable. >> Correct! All what you say could hear to others who are sober just as drunk talks without sincerity. >> Did you mean: All of the things that you say are heard by the others who are sober. They might think that you are insincere. Unfortunately, excessive drinking only leads to more problems and it does not actually provide an end to your problem. >> Correct!

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