Driving drunk
학생이 쓴 원문
We must not drive when we are drunk. The most important reason is
it's too dangerous to drive when we are drunk. It's not safe.
And another car drivers are serouly in danger. There may be some
accident.
강사 첨삭
Hi John,
I agree with you. We should be defensive drivers to keep the road safe.
Have a great day. Here are the corrections.
- Teacher May -
We must not drive when we are drunk.
>>CORRECT
The most important reason is it's too dangerous to drive when we are drunk.
>>The most important reason is it's too dangerous driving drunk.
It's not safe.
>>CORRECTAnd another car drivers are serouly in danger.
>>Another driver is seriuosly in danger.
There may be some accident.
>>CORRECT
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