dropouts
학생이 쓴 원문
I know that nowdays the number og dropouts is increasing in high school.
It is a natural phenomenon in the reality of Korean education.
If thry are problem conscious and challenging they never be satistied about Korean education.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
I appreciate your effort in sharing your thought in the form of writing.
Then, I would like to know your feeling about the phenomenon that these kids dropping out of school. Does it have a positive effect?
See you later.
Aki~
I know that nowdays the number og dropouts is increasing in high school.
>>> I know that nowadays the number of dropouts is increasing in high school.
It is a natural phenomenon in the reality of Korean education.
>>> CORRECT!
If thry are problem conscious and challenging they never be satistied about Korean education.
>>> If they are problem-conscious and is challenging for them, they will never be satisfied with Korean education.
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