Drowsiness all the time.

2012-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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I'm very sleepy now. I'm nodding in a doze while I am writing this one. I don't know how to do. I don't have to nid-nod because I'm in a laboratory. I don't want that nobody see my drowsiness. But I can't stop coming a sleep rapidly or gradually. I'm shaking my head many times for one speedy wink. // The coffee with double shot don't help me out of the sleep. I know that a nap for a while can solve my problem. But nowhere I can take a nap without my dest. But , as I told, I don't want to sleep lying face down on the desk. // Actually, these days, I sleep about for 4 hours evryday except weekends to study. Thus, I'm often closing my eyes. But, to study harder and better, I can't sleep more! Go for my way ! // Now I totally hold on ! But I'm still scared of black when I can see close my eyes. THX for reading my essay(?)

강사 첨삭

Get enough sleep today. Try not to stress yourself too much. Some rest and relaxation will be good for you to retain what you have learned. Anyway, it\'s always my pleasure reading your homework. Have a great day! T. Nica I\'m very sleepy now. >>Correct! I\'m nodding in a doze while I am writing this one. >>I\'m nodding off while I am writing this one.I don\'t know how to do. >>I don\'t know what to do.  I don\'t have to nid-nod because I\'m in a laboratory. >>I shouldn\'t nid-nod because I\'m in a laboratory.I don\'t want that nobody see my drowsiness. >>I don\'t want anyone to see me sleepy. But I can\'t stop coming a sleep rapidly or gradually. >>But I can\'t help falling in and out of sleep.  I\'m shaking my head many times for one speedy wink. >>Correct!//The coffee with double shot don\'t help me out of the sleep. >>The coffee with double shot didn\'t help me out.  I know that a nap for a while can solve my problem. >>I know that taking a nap for a while can solve my problem.  But nowhere I can take a nap without my dest. >>But there\'s no where I can take a nap. >>But I can\'t take a nap without my desk.  But , as I told, I don\'t want to sleep lying face down on the desk. >>But as I told you, I don\'t want to sleep lying face down on a desk.//Actually, these days, I sleep about for 4 hours evryday except weekends to study. >>Actually these days, I sleep about 4 hours everyday except weekends to study. Thus, I\'m often closing my eyes. >>Correct! But, to study harder and better, I can\'t sleep more! >>But to study harder and better, I shouldn\'t sleep more! Go for my way ! (I\'m not exactly sure what you meant. But here are my suggestion:) >>I need to go out of my way to study.//Now I totally hold on ! >>I\'m totally holding on now.  But I\'m still scared of black when I can see close my eyes. >>But I\'m still scared of darkness when I don\'t close my eyes.THX for reading my essay(?) >>Thanks for reading my essay.

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