drunk driving
학생이 쓴 원문
Drunk driving increases the possibility of an accident.
Drinking alcohol be paralyzed driver\'s brain and judgement in the driving.
Driving itself is a dangerous action because it impose damage to others in the road.
Even though wnen we are careful, we encounter unexpected traffic accidents.
All of us are exposed traffic accidents.
We can stop drunk driving through our will and the power of law.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
I agree with what you have said here and even though there are penalties for DUI, still, people violate this traffic law. what do you think is the best solution for this?
Let me know your thought later.
Aki~
Drunk driving increases the possibility of an accident.
>>> CORRECT!
Drinking alcohol be paralyzed driver\'s brain and judgement in the driving.
>>> Drinking alcohol be paralyzed the driver\'s brain and judgment while driving.
Driving itself is a dangerous action because it impose damage to others in the road.
>>> Driving itself is a dangerous action because it imposes damage to others on the road.
Even though wnen we are careful, we encounter unexpected traffic accidents.
>>> Even though we are careful, we encounter unexpected traffic accidents.
All of us are exposed traffic accidents.
>>> All of us are exposed to traffic accidents.
We can stop drunk driving through our will and the power of law.
>>> CORRECT!
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