Duck~~~

2013-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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I ate duck today~ I ate Shabu Shabu with duck, smoked duck, and sujebi~ It tastes very good!!!!!! Also,put Kimchi and noodle into the Shabu Shabu~ Wow~ It tastes really good!!!! I want to recomend to others~

강사 첨삭

Good morning,

Yummy!^^ You made me hungry very early in the morning.

It sounds good. I would like to try that someday.

Thank you for sharing this with me.

Anyways, have a great day and I will see you later.

T. Heidi

 I ate duck today~

>> Correct
I ate Shabu Shabu with duck, smoked duck, and sujebi~

>> Correct
It tastes very good!!!!!!

>> Correct
Also,put Kimchi and noodle into the Shabu Shabu~

>> I also put kimchi and noodles into the Shabu Shabu~
Wow~ It tastes really good!!!!

>> Correct
I want to recomend to others~

>> I want to recommend this to others.

 

 

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