DUCT_AIR Piping Cleaning Work Standard(4)
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Full Purge is applied to piping between adjacent equipments.
However, if pipes are included in the equipment, decide according to the entire cleaning plan.
he entire Purge is installed on the main pipe at the end of each floor to determine if there is any foreign object in the silencer by performing an air purge for one day.
Tape the magnet to the end of the PIPE and rub it inside the duct to see if any foreign object(iron ingredients) are coming out.
Use air purge and vacuum cleaner to clean the blender mixer in this work standard sheet.
Method of cleaning the blender mixer. / How to Clean the Blender Mixer. (Which sentence is more natural to these documents?)
The inside of the blender mixer is carried inside by a person, and the part air purge is done more than twice, and the entire purge is sucked into every nook and cranny with a vacuum.
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Full Purge is applied to piping between adjacent equipments.
>>>Full Purge is applied to pipes between adjacent equipment.
he entire Purge is installed on the main pipe at the end of each floor to determine if there is any foreign object in the silencer by performing an air purge for one day.
>>> The entire purge will be installed on a main pipe at the end of each floor to determine if there is any foreign object in the silencer by performing an air purge for one day.
Tape the magnet to the end of the PIPE and rub it inside the duct to see if any foreign object(iron ingredients) are coming out.
>>>Tape the magnet to the end of a pipe and rub it inside the duct to see if any foreign objects like iron ingredients are coming out.
Method of cleaning the blender mixer. / How to Clean the Blender Mixer. (Which sentence is more natural to these documents?)
>>>Methods of cleaning a blender mixer is more natural.
The inside of the blender mixer is carried inside by a person, and the part air purge is done more than twice, and the entire purge is sucked into every nook and cranny with a vacuum.
he entire Purge is installed on the main pipe at the end of each floor to determine if there is any foreign object in the silencer by performing an air purge for one day.
>>> The entire purge will be installed on a main pipe at the end of each floor to determine if there is any foreign object in the silencer by performing an air purge for one day.
Tape the magnet to the end of the PIPE and rub it inside the duct to see if any foreign object(iron ingredients) are coming out.
>>>Tape the magnet to the end of a pipe and rub it inside the duct to see if any foreign objects like iron ingredients are coming out.
Method of cleaning the blender mixer. / How to Clean the Blender Mixer. (Which sentence is more natural to these documents?)
>>>Methods of cleaning a blender mixer is more natural.
The inside of the blender mixer is carried inside by a person, and the part air purge is done more than twice, and the entire purge is sucked into every nook and cranny with a vacuum.
>>>The inside of a blender mixer will be carried inside by a person, and the part of an air purge is done more than twice, and the entire purge is sucked into every nook and cranny with a vacuum.
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