During the first meeting
학생이 쓴 원문
During the first meeting, the worst thing I think is that someone is not on time. Being on time is always important. Although someone is very close with you, keeping an appointment is a basic manner. Getting late could be a habit. Especially at the first meeting, if you are late, it can be rude and make a bad impression.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
This is a make or break during the first meeting. Unless nothing life threatening occurs, arriving on time is a basic measure to mean that we respect others.
However in truth, people arrive or even cancel during the last minute and without considering discomfort or inconvenience on the other end.
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See you in a few.
-T. Donna~
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Or: During the first meeting, the worst thing I could think of is that someone is not on time.
Being on time is always important.
>> Correct!
Although someone is very close with you, keeping an appointment is a basic manner.
>> Correct!
Getting late could be a habit.
>> Correct!
Especially at the first meeting, if you are late, it can be rude and make a bad impression.
>> Correct!
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