Dusan lose KIA win = So happy
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Today Dusan Bears was lost the game.KIA Tigers won the Lotte Giants for 11-2.And Dusan Bears lost the SK Wibuns to 8-6.It was really wonderful. I can sleep well.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s nice to know that KIA Tigers won. This is good news for you and for KIA Tigers\' fans.
I\'m happy for you.
Okay, you can sleep well now.
Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^__^
Today Dusan Bears was lost the game.
>> Today, Doosan Bears lost the game.
>> or: Doosan Bears lost in the baseball game today.
KIA Tigers won the Lotte Giants for 11-2.And Dusan Bears lost the SK Wibuns to 8-6.
>> KIA Tigers won over the Lotte Giants in the score of 11-2 and Doosan Bears lost over the SK Wyverns in the score of 8-6.
It was really wonderful.
>> correct
I can sleep well.
>> correct
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