duty
학생이 쓴 원문
It is very sensitive social issue that mandatory military service for Korean men.
So the drafe dogers are condemned seriously by society.
The problem is that the indicted person are all children of high class groups.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Everyone has their reasons for not wanting or dodging military service, regardless, no one should be exempted unless they qualify for the grounds of not performing their duty as military men.THe sad part here, only those who are in power are enjoying this privilege without being totally punished.
Talk to you later.
Aki~
It is very sensitive social issue that mandatory military service for Korean men.
>>> It is a very sensitive social issue that mandatory military service for Korean men.
So the drafe dogers are condemned seriously by society.
>>> So the draft dodgers are condemned seriously by society.
The problem is that the indicted person are all children of high-class groups.
>>> CORRECT!
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