Dysfunctional Family

2010-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Bianca

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Do you think that dysfunctional family life distributes to worsening relationship in society? Yes, I do. Rising divorce rate is causing many dyfunctional families. Childhood needs love and interests from their parents, but dysfunctional family's childeren couldn't have good memories. That is causing worsening relationship in society. The memory, specially in childhood, is very important for their life. It becomes the creteria for judgement. We make family happy for their positive relationship in society. * I don't know whether I understand the meaning of "dysfunctional" or not. ^^;

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]! I definitely agree with you, remember that the smallest unit that makes up a society is the family, so how a family functions affects the behavior of each member in the family. It is also true that how a child was brought up is important and is a crucial factor on how a person will turn out when he grows up.       Yes, I do. >> Yes, I think it does.Childhood needs love and interests from their parents,but dysfunctional family's childeren couldn't have good memories. >> Children need love and attention from their parents but children who grew up in a dysfunctional family don't have good memories with their parents/family. That is causing worsening relationship in society. >> This worsens the realtionships in the society.The memory, specially in childhood, is very important for their life. >> Memories with family, most especially childhood memories are important in one's life.It becomes the creteria for judgement. >> It is a crucial factor.We make family happy for their positive relationship in society. >> A happy family contributes to a positive relationship in society.       *A dysfunctional family is a family in which conflict, misbehavior, and often abuse on the part of individual members of the family occur continually and regularly, leading other members to accommodate such actions.

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