dysfunctional family

2018-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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the way to help that friend is to ask for help to public institution like police office, childeren protection agency, clinic. if i can work out kinds of that situations, i would want to help myself, but i don't know which way is good to solve the problem. even, it can make problem worse. so i recommend my friend to talk with professional. one fo the most important thing i have to do is to take care my friend. i would listen and think together to find a good solution. maybe a freind who live wiht dyfunctional family would need the friend who talk frequently.

강사 첨삭

Hello Yen!

Thank you for taking the time to make your homework even though you are sick. Keep up the good work and get well soon!^^

~~Teacher Kate


1. the way to help that friend is to ask for help to public institution like police office, childeren protection agency, clinic.

>>>A way to help that friend is to ask the help of public institutions like the police office, children protection agency, and clinics.
2. if i can work out kinds of that situations, i would want to help myself, but i don\'t know which way is good to solve the problem.

>>>If I come across situations like that, I would like to help but I don\'t know what the best solution is.
3. even, it can make problem worse. so i recommend my friend to talk with professional.

>>>Sometimes, it can even make the problem worse so I would recommend my friend to talk to a professional.
4. one fo the most important thing i have to do is to take care my friend.

>>>One of the most important things I have to do is to take care of my friend.
5. i would listen and think together to find a good solution.

>>>I would listen to him/ her and we can think of a good solution together.
6. maybe a freind who live wiht dyfunctional family would need the friend who talk frequently.

>>>I think someone who lives with a dysfunctional family needs a friend whom they can talk to frequently.

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