dysfunctional family
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Yen!
Thank you for taking the time to make your homework even though you are sick. Keep up the good work and get well soon!^^
~~Teacher Kate
1. the way to help that friend is to ask for help to public institution like police office, childeren protection agency, clinic.
>>>A way to help that friend is to ask the help of public institutions like the police office, children protection agency, and clinics.
2. if i can work out kinds of that situations, i would want to help myself, but i don\'t know which way is good to solve the problem.
>>>If I come across situations like that, I would like to help but I don\'t know what the best solution is.
3. even, it can make problem worse. so i recommend my friend to talk with professional.
>>>Sometimes, it can even make the problem worse so I would recommend my friend to talk to a professional.
4. one fo the most important thing i have to do is to take care my friend.
>>>One of the most important things I have to do is to take care of my friend.
5. i would listen and think together to find a good solution.
>>>I would listen to him/ her and we can think of a good solution together.
6. maybe a freind who live wiht dyfunctional family would need the friend who talk frequently.
>>>I think someone who lives with a dysfunctional family needs a friend whom they can talk to frequently.
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