E-bay

2011-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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These days, I found something interesting. It is E-bay which is the most famous shopping site in the world. and I also found the items in E bay are cheaper than ones in korea. So I found some way to make a pocket money. I decided to buy some watches in E bay and resell them in Korea at higher price. So I bought about 12 watches in E bay. and they arrived today. I want to have a thriving business.

강사 첨삭

My dear [이름], You are such a very smart guy, having that kind of idea will give you a very lucrative job,kkk... Anyway, job well done on your composition my dear, keep up the good work.. T.Cam  These days, I found something interesting. >>correctIt is E-bay which is the most famous shopping site in the world.and I also found the items in E bay are cheaper than ones in korea.>>correctSo I found some way to make a pocket money. >>So I found some ways on how to earn my pocket money.I decided to buy some watches in E bay and resell them in Koreaat higher price. >>correctSo I bought about 12 watches in E bay.and they arrived today.>>correctI want to have a thriving business. >>correct

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