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2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Dear. julia. I know that what you said. So, I surely have to receave all audit data until 22.July(THU). Example data) 1. monthly report 2. consolidation package 3. management letter . . . and so on. please, hurry up. and you know , Our audit is supposed to be next week. and refer to the attached file you sent me last quarter, and check the file you will send me. I will remind you that deadline is 22.July(THU) again. thank you.

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Hi Dan! This message seems urgent so here are your corrections: -Teacher JM Dear. julia. >>>Dear [Name],I know that what you said.>>>I understand about what you saidSo, I surely have to receave all audit data until 22.July(THU).>>>So I surely have to receive all the audit data until  July22(THU).Example data) 1. monthly report>>>Here's an example data) 1. monthly report2. consolidation package>>>correct3. management letter>>>correct. and so on.>>>...and so onplease, hurry up. and you know , Our audit is supposed to be next week.>>>Please hurry up. And you know, our audit is supposed to be accomplished next week.and refer to the attached file you sent me last quarter, and check the file you will send me.>>>Try to refer to the attached file you sent me last quarter, and check the file before you send it to meI will remind you that deadline is 22.July(THU) again.>>>I remind you again, that the deadline is July 22(THU).thank you. >>>correct

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