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2015-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I’m sorry for my late reply. I had a long business trip abroad. My major is non-destructive testing for stone cultural heritages such as ultrasonic measurement, infrared thermography, structural behavioral monitoring, three-dimensional digital documentation, etc. In addition, I am studying to develop new non-destructive technologies for diagnosis and health evaluation of architectural heritages. Unfortunately, I don’t have skype ID. I will make skype ID soon. Have a great day ahead! Sincerely yours, Young Hoon Jo

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Hi there, Sir [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I guess you\'re busy with a lot of paper works again. I hope you\'re managing well. Take care always! T. JanE ^^ Dear [Name]. [Name],>> Correct I’m sorry for my late reply.>> Correct I had a long business trip abroad.>> Correct My major is non-destructive testing for stone cultural heritages such as ultrasonic measurement, infrared thermography, structural behavioral monitoring, three-dimensional digital documentation, etc. >> Correct In addition, I am studying to develop new non-destructive technologies for diagnosis and health evaluation of architectural heritages.>> Correct Unfortunately, I don’t have skype ID. >> Correct I will make Skype ID soon. >> I will make my Skype ID soon. Have a great day ahead!>> Correct Sincerely yours,Young Hoon Jo >> Correct

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