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Dear [Name] Systems,
Hello! I am [Name] Hoon Jo from South Korea.
I am a post-doctoral researcher in
My major is non-destructive safety diagnosis for stone monuments.
I mainly study the development and application of nondestructive techniques for conserving the stone monument.
I have used the A1040 Mira on a stone monument last year.
I was suprised convenience and various function when I applied the instrument to defect zones of stone monument.
So, I would like to study detection of defect zone of stone monuments using A1040 MIRA in the future.
Recently, I searched materials about A1040 MIRA on the internet because I would like to know a principle of the instrument.
But I can't search a lot of information about the principle.
I only got quick manual and basic information provided on the internet.
I would appreciate any information you could send me regarding detail operating principle of A1040 MIRA.
Thank you very much.
Best wishes
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!!
That was a great composition. ^^ Good luck to your research and I hope they\'ll send you some information you needed. ^^
Have a great evening and a wonderful weekend ahead.
Teacher Jane ^_^
Dear [Name] Systems,>>CORRECT!Hello! I am [Name] Hoon Jo from South Korea.
>>CORRECT!I am a post-doctoral researcher in >>CORRECT! [But the sentence is incomplete with out the name of your school. ^^]My major is non-destructive safety diagnosis for stone monuments.
>>CORRECT!I mainly study the development and application of nondestructive techniques for conserving the stone monument.
>>CORRECT!I have used the A1040 Mira on a stone monument last year.>>CORRECT! [But it would be best if you capitalize MIRA. ^^]I was suprised convenience and various function when I applied the instrument to defect zones of stone monument.
>>MAYBE YOU MEAN TO SAY: I was surprised with the convenience and various functions when I applied the instrument to detect defect zones of stone in the monument. So, I would like to study detection of defect zone of stone monuments using A1040 MIRA in the future.
>>CORRECT!Recently, I searched materials about A1040 MIRA on the internet because I would like to know a principle of the instrument.>>CORRECT! [capitalize the word \"Internet\"]But I can\'t search a lot of information about the principle.
>>CORRECT!I only got quick manual and basic information provided on the internet.
>>CORRECT!I would appreciate any information you could send me regarding detail operating principle of A1040 MIRA.
>>I would appreciate any information you could send me regarding detailed operating principles of the A1040 MIRA.Thank you very much.>>CORRECT!Best wishes
>>CORRECT!
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