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2013-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Dear [Name] Systems, Hello! I am [Name] Hoon Jo from South Korea. I am a post-doctoral researcher in My major is non-destructive safety diagnosis for stone monuments. I mainly study the development and application of nondestructive techniques for conserving the stone monument. I have used the A1040 Mira on a stone monument last year. I was suprised convenience and various function when I applied the instrument to defect zones of stone monument. So, I would like to study detection of defect zone of stone monuments using A1040 MIRA in the future. Recently, I searched materials about A1040 MIRA on the internet because I would like to know a principle of the instrument. But I can't search a lot of information about the principle. I only got quick manual and basic information provided on the internet. I would appreciate any information you could send me regarding detail operating principle of A1040 MIRA. Thank you very much. Best wishes

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Hi there!!! That was a great composition. ^^ Good luck to your research and I hope they\'ll send you some information you needed. ^^ Have a great evening and a wonderful weekend ahead. Teacher Jane ^_^   Dear [Name] Systems,>>CORRECT!Hello! I am [Name] Hoon Jo from South Korea. >>CORRECT!I am a post-doctoral researcher in >>CORRECT! [But the sentence is incomplete with out the name of your school. ^^]My major is non-destructive safety diagnosis for stone monuments. >>CORRECT!I mainly study the development and application of nondestructive techniques for conserving the stone monument. >>CORRECT!I have used the A1040 Mira on a stone monument last year.>>CORRECT! [But it would be best if you capitalize MIRA. ^^]I was suprised convenience and various function when I applied the instrument to defect zones of stone monument. >>MAYBE YOU MEAN TO SAY: I was surprised with the convenience and various functions when I applied the instrument to detect defect zones of stone in the monument.  So, I would like to study detection of defect zone of stone monuments using A1040 MIRA in the future. >>CORRECT!Recently, I searched materials about A1040 MIRA on the internet because I would like to know a principle of the instrument.>>CORRECT! [capitalize the word \"Internet\"]But I can\'t search a lot of information about the principle. >>CORRECT!I only got quick manual and basic information provided on the internet. >>CORRECT!I would appreciate any information you could send me regarding detail operating principle of A1040 MIRA. >>I would appreciate any information you could send me regarding detailed operating principles of the A1040 MIRA.Thank you very much.>>CORRECT!Best wishes >>CORRECT!

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