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2011-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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• Pharmacy: The clinical trial pharmacist trained all the part-time pharmacists on their duty about storage and handling of IP according to the KGCP. This training was done as of 10 Nov 2010. The responsible staffs for IP code set up also changed the OCS system to block access of non-investigators to IP on 06 Dec 2010. The investigators approved by the IRB only have the authority to prescribe the according IP. • IRB: The IRB sent out notification letter to the PI, pharmacy, the head of institution to recommend the follow up action on 2 Nov 2010. The IRB hold workshop for investigators of the site on 17 Dec 2010. This issue was shared with all the attendee to prevent recurrence during the workshop.

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Hi there! You have a good composition. Anyway, I have included some corrections for your improvement. Take care! -T. Joanna Pharmacy: The clinical trial pharmacist trained all the part-time pharmacists on their duty about storage and handling of IP according to the KGCP. >> Correct. This training was done as of 10 Nov 2010. >> This training started last November 10th of 2010. The responsible staffs for IP code set up also changed the OCS system to block access of non-investigators to IP on 06 Dec 2010. >> The responsible staffs for IP code set up also a change on the OCS system to block access of non-investigators to IP on December 6th, 2010. The investigators approved by the IRB only have the authority to prescribe the according IP. >> The investigators, approved by the IRB, only have the authority to prescribe the according IP. IRB: The IRB sent out notification letter to the PI, pharmacy, the head of institution to recommend the follow up action on 2 Nov 2010. >> IRB: The IRB sent out notification letter to the PI, to the pharmacy, and to the head of institution to recommend the follow up action on November 2nd, 2010. The IRB hold workshop for investigators of the site on 17 Dec 2010. >> The IRB held a workshop for investigators of the site last December 17th, 2010. This issue was shared with all the attendee to prevent recurrence during the workshop. >> Correct.

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