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Dear [Name] and Karen, We understand how progress MSCCT update clearly. Could you discuss e-RT and let us know how to progress this? The HZC112206 site will conduct close out activity within this Jan, therefore, 4 MSCCT ; 3 sites not participated, 1 site has 2 MSCCT so 1 of MSCCT has to returned, we have to inform the site staffs regarding confirmation of returnship as soon as possible. If not agreed with E-RT, we will send 4 MSCCT to Germany soon. Please let us know the discussion.

Hi, Miss. [Name]! Good to know you are practicing your writing skill. Keep on writing.^^ A good way to improve your English. Be inspired always!   I corrected some of your composition;   Dear [Name] and Karen, >>correctWe understand how progress MSCCT update clearly. >>We clearly understand how MSCCT update is in progress.Could you discuss e-RT and let us know how to progress this? >>But could you discuss e-RT further and let us know how to improve this?The HZC112206 site will conduct close out activity within this Jan, therefore, 4 MSCCT; 3 sites not participated, 1 site has 2 MSCCT >>The HZC112206 site will conduct a close out activity anytime this January. Whereas, 4 MSCCT; no participation from 3 sites, and 1 site have 2 MSCCT will be checked.  so 1 of MSCCT has to returned, we have to inform the site staffs regarding confirmation of returnship as soon as possible. >>Therefore, 1 extra of MSCCT has to be returned. We have to inform the site staffs regarding confirmation of excess MSCCT to be returned as soon as possible.If not agreed with E-RT, we will send 4 MSCCT to Germany soon. Please let us know the discussion. >>If there are still issues to be discussed about the e-RT, we will send 4 MSCCT to Germany soon. Please let us know your opinion.   Truly yours, XXXXX