학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]
In reply to your recent letter, we just want to say that we are sorry.
We did not know whether we applied our proposal to National Research Foundation of Korea(NRF).
Today, we tried to contact with the NRF to check a international joint research project, but the NRF’s notice about it was already finished last week unfortunately.
We are afraid that our joint proposal does not apply to the NRF.
But, we can apply it again next time if there are enough consultation and time for proposal preparation between Korea and Russia researchers.
Thank you very much for your joint research suggestion.
Have a great day ahead!
Sincerely yours,
Seok Won Choi, Chan Hee Lee, Young Hoon Jo
강사 첨삭
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Dear [Name],>> Correct In reply to your recent letter, we just want to say that we are sorry.>> In response to your recent letter, we just want to say that we are sorry.
We did not know whether we applied our proposal to National Research Foundation of Korea(NRF). >> We did not know whether we applied our proposal to National Research Foundation of Korea (NRF) or not.
Today, we tried to contact with the NRF to check a international joint research project, but the NRF’s notice about it was already finished last week unfortunately. >> Today, we tried contacting the NRF to check if there\'s an international joint research project, but unfortunately, the NRF notified us that it was already finished last week.
We are afraid that our joint proposal does not apply to the NRF.>> We are afraid that our joint proposal was not accepted by the NRF.
But, we can apply it again next time if there are enough consultation and time for proposal preparation between Korea and Russia researchers.>> But we can apply again next time as long as there\'s enough time for consultation and proposal preparation between Korean and Russian researchers.
Thank you very much for your joint research suggestion. >> Correct Have a great day ahead!>> Correct Sincerely yours,Seok Won Choi, Chan Hee Lee, Young Hoon Jo
>> Correct
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