학생이 쓴 원문
I have to send this e-mail Head office, So I want you to see it
and use the soft expression.
[Dear [Name] Heidi
I am [이름] who assist Martin Cho.
I am pleased to work together.
I'll Keep in contact with you.
Would you please copy me in an e-mail.
Thank you]
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi.. Hope you'll have a great weekend!! Just keep on practicing and sending your compositions.
I have to send this e-mail Head office, So I want you to see itand use the soft expression.
>> I have to send this email to the Head Office, so I want you to read it and edit some soft expression.[Dear [Name]
>> Dear [Name]
>> Hi HeidiI am [이름] who assist Martin Cho.
>> I am [이름], who assisted Martin Cho.I am pleased to work together.
>> I am pleased that we were able to work together.I'll Keep in contact with you.
>>I'll keep in touch with you.Would you please copy me in an e-mail.
>> Would you please send me a copy to my email?Thank you]
>> Thank you.Thank you.
>> Correct
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