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How are you these days? Are you ok to manage your team member? How many members do you have responsibility? Please send me your organization chart~ The for cause audit was not any big issue. à I thought GSK is NOT tough as same as SA.Do you have any plan to visit Korea this year? (For inspection, or anything else)The Norvatis will be conduct PMDA inspection in Feb for Korean 2 sites. Nowadays, I feel better than last year. Next week, in Korea, The new lunar day will be coming.!! So I will be relax. I hope you will not work over time every day. Please take care your health above all! My baby is 6 months in no time… Time goes so fast.

Hello [이름]^^ Your e-mail for correction was really good. You have a wide range of vocabulary  and you we’re able to express your ideas and thoughts very well, however, try to study more on your verb tenses especially on the continuous form of verbs. Anyway, keep up the good work and have a wonderful  weekend ahead of you. Bye bye and take care ~T. Joanna~     How are you these days? >> correct Are you ok to manage your team member? >> Are you doing okay in managing your team members?How many members do you have responsibility? >> How many members are you responsible in managing?  Please send me your organization chart~ >> Please send me your organizational chart.  The for cause audit was not any big issue. à >> The result of the audit was not a big issue and grave. I thought GSK is NOT tough as same as SA. >> I thought GSK is not as tough as SA. Do you have any plan to visit Korea this year? >> Do you have any plans of visiting Korea this year? (For inspection, or anything else) >> correct The Norvatis will be conduct PMDA inspection in Feb for Korean 2 sites. >> The Norvatis will be conducting PMDA inspection in February for two Korean sites. Nowadays, I feel better than last year. >> correct  Next week, in Korea, The new lunar day will be coming.!! >> correct  So I will be relax. >> So I can relax.I hope you will not work over time every day. >> I hope you will not be working overtime everyday. Please take care your health above all! >> Above all, I hope you will take care of your health!My baby is 6 months in no time… Time goes so fast. >> correct