E-Reading
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Theme : [ESSAY] What are the advantages and disadvantages of reading on an e-reading device, such as a Kindle or iPad?
I think it is not good because you can\'t concentrate a lot.
It is an online device so you can go to on internet platform while reading.
And It wouldn\'t be remembered.
Because It has not good concentrate.
So I think it is not good because you can\'t concentrate a lot.
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Theme : [ESSAY] What are the advantages and disadvantages of reading on an e-reading device, such as a Kindle or iPad?
I think it is not good because you can\'t concentrate a lot.
>> OR: I wouldn\'t recommend it because it would be hard to concentrate when reading.
It is an online device so you can go to on internet platform while reading.
>> It is an online device so you can go to other internet platforms while reading.
And It wouldn\'t be remembered.Because It has not good concentrate.
>> And you wouldn\'t remember what you\'re reading because it\'s not easy to focus.
So I think it is not good because you can\'t concentrate a lot.
>> Therefore, I believe it\'s not a good idea to use such e-reading devices as you\'ll have a hard time concentrating.
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