E.T.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] ^^
That was really interesting.
I really hope you enjoyed your time watching the movie.
I\'m looking forward to hearing other stories of your favorite movies soon.
See you in our class.
Have a great day.^^
--Teacher Kris
Steven Spilburg made the E.T.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Steven Spilburg produced the movie E.T.
The content is the ailen come to the Earth.
>> The story is about aliens which came to Earth.
Children and ailen become friend.
>> The children and the aliens became friends.
Children protect ailen from the adult and helped ailen to go to their home.
>> The children protected the aliens from the adults and helped them go to their homes.
Steven Spilburg made th E.T. ailen similar with Cameroon\'s sculpture.
>> The aliens in the movie are similar to the Cameroon\'s sculpture.
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