Eariler reading

2025-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Eariler reading habbit is important to improve some language skills. So, I think reading is good for children but, it can\'t be force. If I let to read some books for 30 [이름]utes a day, they will do that. But I don\'t ask, they won\'t read book and lose interesting for book. For good academic performance, I think interesting is important thing to focus on studies. And other preschool factors are something that influence healthy mental.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jady!
We have a goal to achieve.
Good job on your diligence.
Please take note of the suggested terms that are usually used for the scenarios given.
Apply them in your future work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

Eariler reading habbit is important to improve some language skills.

>> Developing an early reading habit is important to improve language skills.
So, I think reading is good for children but, it can\'t be force.

>> I think reading is good for children, but it can\'t be forced.
If I let to read some books for 30 [이름]utes a day, they will do that.

>> If I ask them to read books for 30 [이름]utes a day, they will do that.
But I don\'t ask, they won\'t read book and lose interesting for book.

>> However, if I don’t ask them, they won’t read books and they may lose interest in reading.
For good academic performance, I think interesting is important thing to focus on studies.

>> For good academic performance, I believe interest is an important factor in staying focused on studies.
And other preschool factors are something that influence healthy mental.

>> Additionally, other preschool experiences influence healthy mental development.

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