Early in the morning.

2012-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

I studied until 2 A.M. last night and I woke up at 6 A.M. Nica called me at about 6:30. It was early in the morning. // I prepared things that I want to say, including what I did yesterday and interview prepareation, in a phone class. But I couldn't say a word. I felt myself rocking my world. But Nica kindly helped me keep saying something that I could say. But I lost myself, especially touge. It was also early in the morning. // After the class, I slept a wink just for one hour and woke up and slept a wink for one hour more again. When I really woke up, it was still early in the morning. // When I arrived at my laboratory, I checked in today's feedback in Power English. And I strongly impressed after Nica's comment. She said, 'Trust your caliber because not everyone has a caliber as great as yours.'. Thank you very much. After impressed, I saw out windows. At last, it was in the morning shined.

강사 첨삭

Awesome! You\'ve no idea how deeply impressed I was as well with your performance in class. I am confident that there is something more to you than meets the eye. Thanks for sending in this composition. Have a splendid weekend! T. Nica I studied until 2 A.M. last night and I woke up at 6 A.M. >>Correct!Nica called me at about 6:30. >>Correct!  It was early in the morning. >>Correct!//I prepared things that I want to say, including what I did yesterday and interview prepareation, in a phone class. >>I prepared things that I want to say including what I did yesterday and my interview preparations for my phone class. But I couldn\'t say a word. >>Correct! I felt myself rocking my world. >>I felt like my world is rocking. But Nica kindly helped me keep saying something that I could say. >>But Nica kindly helped me say what I couldn\'t But I lost myself, especially touge. >>But I lost myself because it was tough.  It was also early in the morning.>>Correct! //After the class, I slept a wink just for one hour and woke up and slept a wink for one hour more again. >>Acter the class, I slept a wink just for one hour and woke up then slept a wink again for one hour. When I really woke up, it was still early in the morning. >>Correct!//When I arrived at my laboratory, I checked in today\'s feedback in Power English. >>Correct! And I strongly impressed after Nica\'s comment. >>And I\'m strongly impressed with Nica\'s comment.  She said, \'Trust your caliber because not everyone has a caliber as great as yours.\'. >>Correct!  Thank you very much. >>Correct!After impressed, I saw out windows. >>After being impressed, I looked out the window.  At last, it was in the morning shined. >>At last, the sun was shining brightly.

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