Earthquake in Gyeongju
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Earthquake make our class don't go to Gyeongju.Gyeongju has 1,000history in tha ancient kingdom.Gyeongju is a big museum.There is a lot of heritage.There is earthquake last week and there is earthquake a few days ago.There is a rumor that next week there will be a big earthquake.There is Japan next to Korea.Korea only has a small earthquake.But there is a lot of earthquake in Earth.So,Korea is not a safety region.Because of Earthquake we have to go to Everland.
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Hi, [이름]!
You\'ve shared about your opinions and I really admire you because you\'re expressive.
Keep it up!
I understand that you\'re upset because you won\'t go to Gyeongju anymore.
But that is for your safety. Just enjoy everything in Everland.
_Teacher Dianne
Earthquake make our class don\'t go to Gyeongju.
>> The eartquake caused our class not to go to Gyeongju.
Gyeongju has 1,000history in tha ancient kingdom.
>> Gyeongju has 1,000 history in the ancient kingdom.
Gyeongju is a big museum.There is a lot of heritage.
>> Gyeongju has a big museum and a lot of heritages.
There is earthquake last week and there is earthquake a few days ago.
>> There was an earthquake last week and a few days ago.
There is a rumor that next week there will be a big earthquake.
>> Correct
>> Or: They say there will be a strong earthquake next week.
There is Japan next to Korea.
>> Japan is next to Korea.
Korea only has a small earthquake.But there is a lot of earthquake in Earth.
>> Korea only had weak earthquakes and it happened a lot.
So,Korea is not a safety region.Because of Earthquake we have to go to Everland.
>> So I think Korea is not safe and because of the earthquakes we have to go to Everland instead of Gyeongju.
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