Earthquake in Japan
학생이 쓴 원문
Last Friday I saw a tragedic news, the earthquake in Japan. A scene just like a movie showed on the TV. Since the great earthquake happend in the country, there has been a series of aftershocks. Some people have died from the tsunami and many people are still having a hard time in daily life. I hope that lifesaving activities in Japan perfom well to save more lives.
강사 첨삭
My dear [이름],
I can feel the sorrow that you feel fo the people in Japan. Let’s just pray that everything will be okay.
God Bless,
~~Julie~~
Here are your corrections:
Last Friday I saw a tragedic news, the earthquake in Japan.
>>Last Friday, I saw tragic news about the earthquake in Japan.
A scene just like a movie showed on the TV.
>>CORRECT^^
Since the great earthquake happend in the country, there has been a series of aftershocks.
>> Since the great earthquake happened in the country, there have been series of aftershocks.
Some people have died from the tsunami and many people are still having a hard time in daily life.
>>CORRECT^^
I hope that lifesaving activities in Japan perfom well to save more lives.
>> I hope that life saving activities in Japan perform well to save more lives.
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