Earthquake in Japan

2011-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

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Last Friday I saw a tragedic news, the earthquake in Japan. A scene just like a movie showed on the TV. Since the great earthquake happend in the country, there has been a series of aftershocks. Some people have died from the tsunami and many people are still having a hard time in daily life. I hope that lifesaving activities in Japan perfom well to save more lives.

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My dear [이름], I can feel the sorrow that you feel fo the people in Japan. Let’s just pray that everything will be okay. God Bless, ~~Julie~~   Here are your corrections: Last Friday I saw a tragedic news, the earthquake in Japan. >>Last Friday, I saw tragic news about the earthquake in Japan. A scene just like a movie showed on the TV. >>CORRECT^^ Since the great earthquake happend in the country, there has been a series of aftershocks.  >> Since the great earthquake happened in the country, there have been series of aftershocks. Some people have died from the tsunami and many people are still having a hard time in daily life. >>CORRECT^^ I hope that lifesaving activities in Japan perfom well to save more lives. >> I hope that life saving activities in Japan perform well to save more lives.

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