Eassy - what do I think should be done to lessen the environmental problems in my country?
학생이 쓴 원문
That solutions could be divided in short and long-term action.
Solutions in short-term is actins that people can easily follow up such as bring a personal tumbler, using a public transportation, separating recycle garbage etc. If people feel urgent to lessen environmental problems by small actions, it is very valuable staring step.
Government and public movement should lead the long-term actions.
Government has to invest an eco-friendly transportation system and support small & medium size business to install an anti-air pollution equipment.
Eventually, protecting the earth is our responsibility. We all should aware of how important to participate in those actions.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic.
I think, you are an environmentalist!
Here are the corrections.
That solutions could be divided in short and long-term action.
>> That solution could be divided into short and long-term actions.
Solutions in short-term is actins that people can easily follow up such as bring a personal tumbler, using a public transportation, separating recycle garbage etc.
>> Solutions in short-term action includes people to follow rules such as bringing a personal tumbler, using a public transportation, separating garbage for recycling, and others.
If people feel urgent to lessen environmental problems by small actions, it is very valuable staring step.
>> If people feel urgent to lessen environmental problems by small actions, it will be a valuable step.
Government and public movement should lead the long-term actions.
>> Correct!
Government has to invest an eco-friendly transportation system and support small & medium size business to install an anti-air pollution equipment.
>> Correct!
Eventually, protecting the earth is our responsibility. We all should aware of how important to participate in those actions.
>> Eventually, protecting the earth is our responsibility. We, all, should be aware of how important to participate in those actions.
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