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I feel frustrated when I try to express what I want to say in English. I think writing in English is much more easy than speaking in English. Writing is better for me because there is more time to think, I can search a dictionary and correct my expression with google search. But speaking is different. It is a real time, on-going conversation that a person have to say right after the other person say. I have no time to think a lot or search in a dictionary. I have to say any words, even if I already know that they are wrong expression. I think the problem is here. Actually I am a perfectionist who strives for high performance in every area. I hate making a mistake even when it is the first time to do it. Maybe that is the reason why I didn't try English speaking at all before and that I feel discouraged now. I know I need to keep going even though I experience these kinds of feelings. I hope to enjoy speaking in English regardless of the mistake!
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A wonderful day to you, [이름]!
Don\'t feel frustrated. Studying English takes times and requires lots of patience. You don\'t have to rush, take your time, okay? It\'s gonna be fine. Don\'t worry. Anyway, thank you so much for finding time to do an essay for me. Please take care and have a wonderful day ahead!
I feel frustrated when I try to express what I want to say in English.
>>CORRECT!
I think writing in English is much more easy than speaking in English.
>>CORRECT
>>I think writing in English is easier than speaking.
Writing is better for me because there is more time to think, I can search a dictionary and correct my expression with google search.
>>CORRECT
>>Writing is more comfortable for me because I can have more time to think, I have time to search the dictionary, and correct my expressions through google search.
But speaking is different.
>>CORRECT
It is a real time, on-going conversation that a person have to say right after the other person say.
>>It is a real time, on-going conversation that a person has to answer right away.
I have no time to think a lot or search in a dictionary.
>>I have no time to think a lot or search in the dictionary.
I have to say any words, even if I already know that they are wrong expression.
>>I have to say something, even if I already know that those are wrong expressions.
I think the problem is here.
>>CORRECT
Actually I am a perfectionist who strives for high performance in every area.
>>Actually, I am a perfectionist who strives for a high performance in every area.
I hate making a mistake even when it is the first time to do it.
>>CORRECT
>>I hate committing errors eventhough it\'s my first time.
Maybe that is the reason why I didn\'t try English speaking at all before and that I feel discouraged now.
>>CORRECT
I know I need to keep going even though I experience these kinds of feelings.
>>CORRECT
I hope to enjoy speaking in English regardless of the mistake!
>>CORRECT
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