Easter

Easter is just around the corner. It will be on Sunday. Although I was very busy because of preparing the mid-term exam, I went to the church today. In there, I did a sacrament of penance to a priest because it is a duty for catholic to confess one’s sin before Easter. For me, it was the first time in two years. I confessed that I couldn’t go to the church for a long time and I often told a lie to my friends. Also, I reflected my wrongdoings. I promised myself that I will not do those behaviors again. After the confession, I feel comfortable mentally.

Hello there. Thank you for dropping by. I hope to see you tomorrow on our class. Hear are my corrections. Easter is just around the corner. >>>Correct.It will be on Sunday. >>> Correct.Although I was very busy because of preparing the mid-term exam, I went to the church today. >>> Even though I was very busy studying for my midterm exam I still went to church awhile ago.In there, I did a sacrament of penance to a priest because >>> At the church I received the Sacrament of Penance from a priest. because it is a duty for catholic to confess one’s sin before Easter. >>> Because it is a duty of every Catholic to confess one's sin before Easter. (Better)For me, it was the first time in two years. >>> For me, This was my first time after two years. (Better)I confessed that I couldn’t go to the church for a long time >>> I confessed that I haven't been going to church for a very long time now. and I often told a lie to my friends. >>> and that I often tell lies to my friends.Also, I reflected my wrongdoings. >>> Also, I reflected on my wrongdoings. (Better)I promised myself that I will not do those behaviors again. >>>Correct.After the confession, I feel comfortable mentally. >>> After the confession I felt that my mind was at peace. (Better)