Easter's festival

2018-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

학생이 쓴 원문

There will be a Easter's festival tommorrow.Many people will participate that festival.My team's acting is really horrible.But I will do it.I hope there will be a delicious foods.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your assignment today buddy

Good luck on your performance tomorrow
and enjoy the festival
I\'ll see you next week
Enjoy your Weekend. ^^


Teacher Brian

There will be a Easter\'s festival tomorrow.

>>There will be an Easter festival tomorrow

Many people will participate that festival.

>> A lot of people will participate in the festival

My team\'s acting is really horrible.

>>My team\'s acting performance is really horrible

But I will do it. I hope there will be a delicious foods.

>>But il will do my best and I hope that there will be a lot of delicious foods.

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