Easter's festival
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There will be a Easter's festival tommorrow.Many people will participate that festival.My team's acting is really horrible.But I will do it.I hope there will be a delicious foods.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your assignment today buddy
Good luck on your performance tomorrow
and enjoy the festival
I\'ll see you next week
Enjoy your Weekend. ^^
Teacher Brian
There will be a Easter\'s festival tomorrow.
>>There will be an Easter festival tomorrow
Many people will participate that festival.
>> A lot of people will participate in the festival
My team\'s acting is really horrible.
>>My team\'s acting performance is really horrible
But I will do it. I hope there will be a delicious foods.
>>But il will do my best and I hope that there will be a lot of delicious foods.
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