Eating a chicken

2017-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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Me and my wife like to eat a chicken very much. For Korean, Chicken is very popular as midnight snack,and well-suited when drinking beer. Espacially, my wife could eat one whole chicken even looks like she doesn't like to eat. And we have few chicken franchise that we usually love to eat. They're using a variety kinds of sources and cooking method, which are to be grill or fry. After we got married, we used to give an order for the delivery service of a chicken at home every week. But we stopped to eat a chicken often since doctor adviced me that chicken is not suitable for our body type. aside from a chicken, we eat healthy foods, such as fishes and vegitable with rices. But today is special day, it's my wife's last day of going to work. we decided to order a fried chicken, which is very crunchy, to celebrate at that moment. it was very delicious, we didn't just left a piece of chicken.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름]!!


Thanks for sharing this information!! Have a blast on your trip to Japan!!


~Teacher Megan~


HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

Me and my wife like to eat a chicken very much. For Korean, Chicken is very popular as midnight snack,and well-suited when drinking beer.

>>> Me and my wife like to eat chicken very much. For Koreans, Chicken is a very popular midnight snack, and it is well-suited when drinking beer.


especially, my wife could eat one whole chicken even looks like she doesn\'t like to eat. And we have few chicken franchise that we usually love to eat.

>>> especially, my wife could eat one whole chicken even if she looks like she doesn\'t like to eat. And we have few chicken franchise that we usually love to eat in.


 They\'re using a variety kinds of sources and cooking method, which are to be grill or fry.

>>>They\'re using a variety of sauces and cooking methods, such as grill or fried.


 After we got married, we used to give an order for the delivery service of a chicken at home every week.

>>>  Correct.


 But we stopped to eat a chicken often since doctor adviced me that chicken is not suitable for our body type.

>>>  But we stopped eating chicken often since the doctor advised us that chicken is not suitable for our body type.


aside from a chicken, we eat healthy foods, such as fishes and vegitable with rices. But today is special day, it\'s my wife\'s last day of going to work.

>>> aside from chicken, we eat healthy foods, such as fishes and vegetables with rice. But today is special day, it\'s my wife\'s last day of work.


 we decided to order a fried chicken, which is very crunchy, to celebrate at that moment. it was very delicious, we didn\'t just left a piece of chicken.

>>>  we decided to order a fried chicken, which is very crunchy, to celebrate the moment. it was very delicious, we didn\'t left a piece of chicken.

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