Eating habit.
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1. How have your eating habits changed over the years?
My eating habits became unhealthy over last 4years. I am aware of how harmful excessive sodium is, so I had tried to eat not salty. But since I started working as a nurse, I had to skip meals frequently due to busy schedule and workload. And after long fasting times, I ate food at once and fell asleep being exhausted. And to resolve my stress, I drank and started eating food salty and chilly. These bad eating habits gave me indisgestion and heartburn, nausea. But I still have craving for spicy and strong-tasting food when I get stressed. So I have to shape up as soon as possible for my health.
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Hi Yu [이름]!
Thank you for answering the composition question. I apologize that I was not able to respond/check your work quickly because of my equipment problem yesterday.
Anyway, here\'s my comment/ suggestion for your answer. :)
Thank you for answering the composition question. I apologize that I was not able to respond/check your work quickly because of my equipment problem yesterday.
Anyway, here\'s my comment/ suggestion for your answer. :)
Question:
1. How have your eating habits changed over the years?
Your Answer:
My eating habits became unhealthy over last 4years. I am aware of how harmful excessive sodium is, so I had tried to eat not salty. But since I started working as a nurse, I had to skip meals frequently due to busy schedule and workload. And after long fasting times, I ate food at once and fell asleep being exhausted. And to resolve my stress, I drank and started eating food salty and chilly. These bad eating habits gave me indisgestion and heartburn, nausea. But I still have craving for spicy and strong-tasting food when I get stressed. So I have to shape up as soon as possible for my health.
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My eating habits became unhealthy over last the 4 years. I am aware of how harmful excessive sodium is, so I tried to not eat salty foods. But since I started working as a nurse, I had to skip meals frequently due to busy schedule and workload. And after long fasting times, I would eat food at once and go to sleep exhausted. To relieve my stress, I drank and started eating salty and spicy foods. These bad eating habits gave me indigestion, heartburn, and nausea. But I still get cravings for spicy and strong-tasting food whenever I get stressed, so I have to shape up as soon as possible for my health.
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I can totally relate to you! Stress eating is really part of being stressed. We can still enjoy these \'not-so-healthy\' types of food from time to time and in moderation, especially when life just gets too overwhelming and stressful! :D
See you later in class!
~Miya^^
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My eating habits became unhealthy over last the 4 years. I am aware of how harmful excessive sodium is, so I tried to not eat salty foods. But since I started working as a nurse, I had to skip meals frequently due to busy schedule and workload. And after long fasting times, I would eat food at once and go to sleep exhausted. To relieve my stress, I drank and started eating salty and spicy foods. These bad eating habits gave me indigestion, heartburn, and nausea. But I still get cravings for spicy and strong-tasting food whenever I get stressed, so I have to shape up as soon as possible for my health.
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I can totally relate to you! Stress eating is really part of being stressed. We can still enjoy these \'not-so-healthy\' types of food from time to time and in moderation, especially when life just gets too overwhelming and stressful! :D
See you later in class!
~Miya^^
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