Eating habits
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To improve people\'s eating habits is that they is completely restricted unhealthy food but rather that they are allowded to eat unhealthy food designated \"cheat days\" at regular intervals.
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To improve people\'s eating habits is that they is completely restricted unhealthy food but rather that they are allowded to eat unhealthy food designated \"cheat days\" at regular intervals.
>>> To improve people\'s eating habits, it’s not about completely restricting unhealthy food, but rather allowing them to enjoy it on designated \'cheat days\' at regular intervals.
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