eating out
학생이 쓴 원문
I like both, but I prefer to eat at home.
It,s easy to overeat or it,s salty with many seasonings to me
but it,s not bad to eat out sometimes.
I think the food that I made is the best
My family does not approve sadly.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Again, thank you for diligently doing your homework. Please keep up the good work.
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
It,s easy to overeat or it,s salty with many seasonings to me but it,s not bad to eat out sometimes.
>> It\'s easy to overeat at home, and sometimes the food is salty because of many seasonings, that is why it\'s not bad to eat out sometimes.
I think the food that I made is the best ,My family does not approve sadly.
>> I think the food that I made is the best but sadly, my family doesn\'t seem to agree.
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