Eating rice as main meal

2021-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I like my country and its culture. But, I think that it is the best thing to have rice as main meal. Because eating rice is really helpful for our health and it gives us energy to live our lives. Plus, actually, I love rice, so I think this is the best for me in terms of not only eating something that I like but also keeping my body well.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I like my country and its culture. But, I think that it is the best thing to have rice as main meal.

>> I like my country and its culture and I think that it is the best thing to have rice as our main meal.
Because eating rice is really helpful for our health and it gives us energy to live our lives.

>> Eating rice is really helpful for our health and it gives us energy to live our lives.
Plus, actually, I love rice, 

>> Plus, actually, I love rice.

 so I think this is the best for me in terms of not only eating something that I like but also keeping my body well

>>  So I think this is the best for me in terms of not only eating something that I like but also keeping my body well.

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