Ebonics

2011-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

학생이 쓴 원문

Ebonics is a kind of English which is usually used by African-American in U.S.. It's difficult to understand for some foreigners like me because its vocabularise and accents are different from standard English. When we make new freinds, for example, we usually say that "hello, nice to meet you". However, it change as "WHADDUP!!!" in ebonics. For another example, if someone buy new nike shoes, we can say that "Your shoes look very nice!" However, it change as "Drop dem nikes off your ass before I blast you mother F***" in ebonics. I think it's funny, because I have heard that sounds many times in the movies so it's a little familiar with me. Moreover, in my opinion, ebonics is not the inferior language but a kind of English although its user's social and economical status is very low.

강사 첨삭

Hello! You did a great job in writing this piece. Indeed, you're captured the real meaning of the word Ebonics. You were even able to share a few examples. Good job! These are some of the corrections: Ebonics is a kind of English which is usually used by African-American in U.S.. >>Ebonics is a kind of English which is usually used by African-Americans in the U.S.. It's difficult to understand for some foreigners like me because its vocabularise and accents are different from standard English. >> It's difficult to understand for some foreigners like me because its vocabularies and accents are different from standard English.When we make new freinds, for example, we usually say that "hello, nice to meet you". >>When we make new friends, for example, we usually say "hello, nice to meet you". However, it change as "WHADDUP!!!" in ebonics. >>However, its is changed into WHADDUP!!! in ebonics. For another example, if someone buy new nike shoes, we can say that "Your shoes look very nice!" >> For another example, if someone buys new Nike shoes, we can say that "Your shoes look very nice!" However, it change as "Drop dem nikes off your ass before I blast you mother F***" in ebonics.>> However, it changes into "Drop dem nikes off your ass before I blast you mother F***" in ebonics. I think it's funny, because I have heard that sounds many times in the movies so it's a little familiar with me. >>I think it's funny, because I have heard those sounds many times in the movies so it's a little familiar to me. Moreover, in my opinion, ebonics is not the inferior language but a kind of English although its user's social and economical status is very low. >>Correct OR>> Furthermore, in my opinion, ebonics is not the inferior language but a kind of English even though its user's social and economical status is very low.

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