economic development vs. social values
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I think that social values become meaningless when people are extreme poverty where basic human living cannot be maintained. I believe human dignity is more important t[이름] social value. However, I oppose that people put economic development ahead of people\'s lives and safety.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think that social values become meaningless when people are extreme poverty where basic human living cannot be maintained.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> I believe that social values lose their meaning when people are living in extreme poverty and unable to meet their basic needs.
I believe human dignity is more important t[이름] social value.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, I oppose that people put economic development ahead of people\'s lives and safety.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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