Economics

2011-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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These days many students are using the student loan for their tuition fee. In order to pay the expense , some students do part job like serving in a restaurant , teaching high school stuent and so on. Because of the bad ecnomic status in korea , many parents can't afford their children's tuition fee. That's why many students are intereted in gathering money and financial issues.

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Hello there my dear, Thank you so much for the composition you sent me today. Good work on your composition my dear.. Talk to you again later.. T.Cam^^   These days many students are using the student loan for their tuition fee. >>correct!In order to pay the expense , some students do part job like serving in a restaurant , teaching high school stuent and so on.>>In order to pay the expense , some students do part job like serving in a restaurant , teaching high school students and so on. Because of the bad ecnomic status in korea , many parents can't afford their children's tuition fee. >>Because of the bad economic status in Korea, many parents cant afford their children's tution fee.That's why many students are intereted in gathering money and financial issues. >>That's why many students are interested in earning money and financial issues.  

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