Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.
학생이 쓴 원문
For several decades, knowledge has been the most important element when we consider education in Korea. Nowadays many experts emphasize the importance of educating the mind. Schools focus on how to educate the mind.(that\'s why I studied educating the mind when I took the interview test to enter university of education)
Aristotle thought educating the heart when educating the mind is really important. I also agree considering \"true education.\" I think that the mind means consciousness, and the heart means sincerity. If they try to educate only mind, students don\'t understand why they have to do in that way. They need to understand the reason. After understanding it with their whole heart, their mind would be changed.
It is actually hard to educate the heart. However, we can\'t deny the importance. For efficient and meaningful education, we need to make students feel with their heart in person.
강사 첨삭
There\'s definitely a reason to everything.
EQ, emotional intelligence is as important as IQ.
Let\'s not only train our minds but our hearts as well.
I love your point!
Keep it up!
~Teacher Eve.
For several decades, knowledge has been the most important element when we consider education in Korea.
>> Correct!
Nowadays many experts emphasize the importance of educating the mind.
>> Correct!
Schools focus on how to educate the mind.(that\'s why I studied educating the mind when I took the interview test to enter university of education)
>> Schools focus on how to educate the mind, that\'s why I studied educating the mind when I took the interview test to enter university of education.
Aristotle thought educating the heart when educating the mind is really important.
>> Correct!
I also agree considering \"true education.\"
>> I also agree in considering what \"true education\" is.
I think that the mind means consciousness, and the heart means sincerity.
>> Correct!
If they try to educate only mind, students don\'t understand why they have to do in that way.
>> If they try to only educate the mind, students will not understand why they have to do that way.
They need to understand the reason.
>> Correct!
After understanding it with their whole heart, their mind would be changed.
>> After understanding it with their whole heart, their mind would change.
It is actually hard to educate the heart.
>> Correct!
However, we can\'t deny the importance.
>> Correct!
For efficient and meaningful education, we need to make students feel with their heart in person.
>> For efficient and meaningful education, we need to make the students feel with their heart in person.
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