Education
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I will change the Korean education law. because South Korea’s education make students too tired.
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I think that change is for the better.
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I will change the Korean education law.
>> I will change the Korean Education Law.
because South Korea’s education make students too tired.
>>It\'s because South Korea’s education make students too tired.
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