Education
학생이 쓴 원문
Some people want to learn more about their improvement of job.
Other people want to learn for their hobby.
Government have to invest for former person.
But there are a lot of communicare center in Korea.
So they don’t need to invest for adult.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]ny!
I appreciate you for doing your homework. :)
Keep writing your thoughts because it teaches you to express yourself in a different way.
See you in class.
Aki~
Some people want to learn more about their improvement of job.
>>> Some people want to learn more about the improvement of their jobs.
>>> Some people want to learn more how to improve their jobs / skills.
Other people want to learn for their hobby.
>>> CORRECT!
Government have to invest for former person.
>>> The government has to invest in the former person.
But there are a lot of communicare center in Korea.
>>> But there is a lot of communication centers in Korea.
So they don’t need to invest for adult.
>>> So they don’t need to invest in adults.
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