Education and Experience Overseas
학생이 쓴 원문
Education and Experience Overseas
I've been to America to study English for 6 months on a University English Program. I can learn their cultures, attitudes and backgrounds. Also, I often joined a the university class. I could learn speaking English skills trough it. When I stay there after 5 months. swine flue was starting to break out. Although it was in danger I really wanted to stay there more.
So, I always dream to go to abroad after coming at home. It's a great opportunity to can trip other words.
강사 첨삭
Well I\'m glad you didn\'t get sick while you were there. Keep on making your homeworks.
T. Aurora
Education and Experience Overseas
>>Correct!I\'ve been to America to study English for 6 months on a University English Program.
>>I\'ve been to America to study English for 6 months in University English Program.
I can learn their cultures, attitudes and backgrounds.
>>I was able to learn their cultures, attitudes and backgrounds.
Also, I often joined a the university class.
>>I also often join university classes.
I could learn speaking English skills trough it.
>>I could learn speaking in English through it.
When I stay there after 5 months. swine flue was starting to break out.
>>While I was there fro 5 months, the swine flu started to break out.
Although it was in danger I really wanted to stay there more.
>>Although I was in danger, I really wanted to stay there more.
>>Although it was risky, I really wanted to stay there more.
So, I always dream to go to abroad after coming at home.
>>So I dreamed of going abroad after coming home.
It\'s a great opportunity to can trip other words.
>>It was a great opportunity to go on a trip.
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