\"Education should be free\"
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I really agree with that. education must be free as possible as quickly.
it can reduce the gap between the rich and poor and every people can start in the same position. as long as we have democratic ideas we have to give every person the same opportunity. this is the first step to equal.
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HAPPY THURSDAY!
I think we should start a petition for free education.
Great point, [이름]!
Keep it up!
~Teacher Eve.
I really agree with that.
>> Correct!
education must be free as possible as quickly.
>> Education must be free as much as possible and it should happen quick.
it can reduce the gap between the rich and poor and every people can start in the same position.
>> It can reduce the gap between the rich and poor and every people can start with the same position.
as long as we have democratic ideas we have to give every person the same opportunity.
>> As long as we have democratic ideas, we have to give every person the same opportunity.
this is the first step to equal.
>> This is the first step to equality.
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