Egg Hunt
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Theme: [ESSAY] What is an Easter egg hunt? Describe it.
An easter egg hunt is an event that open on easter.
We find hided eggs that is decoraited.
There are many kinds of easter eggs.
There are blue eggs, yellow eggs, green eggs, purple eggs and more.
I like easter egg hunting!
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Theme: [ESSAY] What is an Easter egg hunt? Describe it.
An easter egg hunt is an event that open on easter.
>> An Easter egg hunt is an event that opens on Easter.
>> or: An Easter egg hunt is an event that occurs on Easter Sunday.
We find hided eggs that is decoraited.
>> We find hidden eggs that are decorated, painted or colored.
There are many kinds of easter eggs.
>> There are many kinds of Easter eggs.
>> The word \'Easter\' is capitalized.
There are blue eggs, yellow eggs, green eggs, purple eggs and more.
>> correct
I like easter egg hunting!
>> I like Easter egg hunting!
>> or: I enjoy Easter egg hunting events!
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