Eggs

2015-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

I like to eat eggs. Usually I eat fried eggs and it is much tastier when you put ketchup on it. Eggs have lots of protien so it will make you healthy and stronger. This is the type of eggs: boiled eggs, omlet, fried eggs. Eggs come from chicken and duck. It is interesting that chicken lays egg that has chicks but some of them is an egg. Other animal lay egg to have their baby a birth. Do you like to eat eggs? Which type of egg do you like to eat, teacher Mayleen?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Min!:)   Thank you for this composition, good job, Min!:) I\'ve made some modifications for you to review. Of course I also love to eat eggs especially for breakfast. I like scrambled egg with fried rice, omelet with bread, or hard boiled eggs with instant noodles. My favorite egg dish is the sunnyside up. Do you know that? I also like eating eggplant omelet. Aside from it\'s delicious. It\'s also good for the body. Again, thank you and see you in class.^_-   =T. Mayleen=     I like to eat eggs. >> CORRECT OR: I like eating eggs.   Usually I eat fried eggs and it is much tastier when you put ketchup on it. >> I usually eat frieds eggs and it\'s tasties when you put ketchup on it.   Eggs have lots of protien so it will make you healthy and stronger. >> Eggs have lots of protein so it will make you healthier and stronger.   This is the type of eggs: boiled eggs, omlet, fried eggs. >> These are the ways to cook eggs; boiled eggs, omelet, and friend eggs.   Eggs come from chicken and duck. >> Eggs come from chicken and duck.   It is interesting that chicken lays egg that has chicks but some of them is an egg. >> It is interesting that chicken lay eggs to have chicks but we eat some as just eggs.   Other animal lay egg to have their baby a birth. >> Other animals lay eggs to have their babies. Do you like to eat eggs? >> CORRECT OR: Do you also like to eat eggs.   Which type of egg do you like to eat, teacher Mayleen? >> Which egg dish to you like to eat the most, Teacher Mayleen?  

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