Egung..
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, June !
Can you understend what these mean 'egung'?
That is like a onomatopoeic. When man feels a heavy tired.
I must ready an event. Egung.. I have a too many work must to do.
Egung..
HAHAHAHAHAHA, As man has a big work that never can do, man laugh.
Egung, I want to go home, But I have a duty to do this work.
I feel responsible, then I do !
Today I want to eat chicken specially. Sooooo hungry.ㅠAㅠ
My favorite food list
1. chicken with beer
2. pork rinds
3. cold noodle
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kong Min!
I do enjoy your colorful stories! However, your favorite food list made me sooooo hungry now too. ^^
My top food choices are: pizza, chocolate, potatoes. I also consider these my comfort food. ^^
xoxox
~June
Hello, June !
>> Correct
Can you understend what these mean 'egung'?
>> Do you know what 'egung' means?
That is like a onomatopoeic. When man feels a heavy tired.
>> That is onomatopoeic like when a man feels really tired.
>> That is onomatopoeic like when a man feels weighed down by tiredness.
I must ready an event. Egung..
>> I must prepare for an event. Egung...
I have a too many work must to do. Egung..
>> I have too much work to do. Egung...
HAHAHAHAHAHA, As man has a big work that never can do, man laugh.
>> HAHAHAHAHAHA. If a man has a big task that he thinks he can never do, he laughs.
Egung, I want to go home, But I have a duty to do this work.
>> Egung, I want to go home, but I have a duty to do this work.
I feel responsible, then I do !
>> I feel responsible so I will do it!
Today I want to eat chicken specially. Sooooo hungry.ㅠAㅠ
>> Today I especially want to eat chicken. I'm sooooo hungry. ㅠAㅠ
My favorite food list
>> Correct
>> My favorite food list: (Better)
1. chicken with beer
>> Correct
2. pork rinds
>> Correct
3. cold noodle
>> cold noodles
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