Egung..

2010-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 June

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, June ! Can you understend what these mean 'egung'? That is like a onomatopoeic. When man feels a heavy tired. I must ready an event. Egung.. I have a too many work must to do. Egung.. HAHAHAHAHAHA, As man has a big work that never can do, man laugh. Egung, I want to go home, But I have a duty to do this work. I feel responsible, then I do ! Today I want to eat chicken specially. Sooooo hungry.ㅠAㅠ My favorite food list 1. chicken with beer 2. pork rinds 3. cold noodle

강사 첨삭

Hi, Kong Min! I do enjoy your colorful stories! However, your favorite food list made me sooooo hungry now too. ^^ My top food choices are: pizza, chocolate, potatoes. I also consider these my comfort food. ^^ xoxox ~June Hello, June ! >> Correct Can you understend what these mean 'egung'? >> Do you know what 'egung' means? That is like a onomatopoeic. When man feels a heavy tired. >> That is onomatopoeic like when a man feels really tired. >> That is onomatopoeic like when a man feels weighed down by tiredness. I must ready an event. Egung.. >> I must prepare for an event. Egung... I have a too many work must to do. Egung.. >> I have too much work to do. Egung... HAHAHAHAHAHA, As man has a big work that never can do, man laugh. >> HAHAHAHAHAHA. If a man has a big task that he thinks he can never do, he laughs. Egung, I want to go home, But I have a duty to do this work. >> Egung, I want to go home, but I have a duty to do this work. I feel responsible, then I do ! >> I feel responsible so I will do it! Today I want to eat chicken specially. Sooooo hungry.ㅠAㅠ >> Today I especially want to eat chicken. I'm sooooo hungry. ㅠAㅠ My favorite food list >> Correct >> My favorite food list: (Better) 1. chicken with beer >> Correct 2. pork rinds >> Correct 3. cold noodle >> cold noodles

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