eighth homework
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I try living in both my home country and abroad but if I have to choose one of two, I will choose living in my home country.
The reason that I feel uncomfortable unfamiliar situation, people, surrounding and language. In face, I don't like new things so I have never traveled abroad before.
But I'd like to challenge going abroad someday.
Maybe. Is that day honeymoon?
Ps. Umm... I don't know well overseas because I have never traveled before and I'm not interested in it.
If you are okay, I want to write a different topic.
For example, There are food, study, politic, policy and so on except for overseas.
Can you get my suggestion?
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Hello, [이름]!
Sure, you could write about other topics. We could talk about food if that\'s your interest. I would love that since I love eating too. Talk to you later!
~T. Lynn
I try living in both my home country and abroad but if I have to choose one of two, I will choose living in my home country.
>> I\'ll try living both in my home country and abroad but if I have to choose one of the two, I will choose living in my home country.
The reason that I feel uncomfortable unfamiliar situation, people, surrounding and language.
>> The reason is that I feel uncomfortable in unfamiliar situation, people, surrounding and language.
In fact, I don\'t like new things so I have never traveled abroad before.
>> correct!
But I\'d like to challenge going abroad someday.
>> correct!
Maybe. Is that day honeymoon?
>> Maybe on my honeymoon?
Ps. Umm... I don\'t know well overseas because I have never traveled before and I\'m not interested in it.
>> I don\'t know much about overseas because I have never traveled before and I\'m not interested in it.
If you are okay, I want to write a different topic.
>> If it\'s okay, I want to write about a different topic.
For example, There are food, study, politic, policy and so on except for overseas.
>> For example about food, studying, politics, policy and so on except about traveling abroad.
Can you get my suggestion?
>> Is this okay?
OR>> Do you get what I mean?
Sure, you could write about other topics. We could talk about food if that\'s your interest. I would love that since I love eating too. Talk to you later!
~T. Lynn
I try living in both my home country and abroad but if I have to choose one of two, I will choose living in my home country.
>> I\'ll try living both in my home country and abroad but if I have to choose one of the two, I will choose living in my home country.
The reason that I feel uncomfortable unfamiliar situation, people, surrounding and language.
>> The reason is that I feel uncomfortable in unfamiliar situation, people, surrounding and language.
In fact, I don\'t like new things so I have never traveled abroad before.
>> correct!
But I\'d like to challenge going abroad someday.
>> correct!
Maybe. Is that day honeymoon?
>> Maybe on my honeymoon?
Ps. Umm... I don\'t know well overseas because I have never traveled before and I\'m not interested in it.
>> I don\'t know much about overseas because I have never traveled before and I\'m not interested in it.
If you are okay, I want to write a different topic.
>> If it\'s okay, I want to write about a different topic.
For example, There are food, study, politic, policy and so on except for overseas.
>> For example about food, studying, politics, policy and so on except about traveling abroad.
Can you get my suggestion?
>> Is this okay?
OR>> Do you get what I mean?
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